Zoe
Snow is sometimes a he, a strong one
Fierce, he marks his territory
Growing in rage
that can't be tamed.
Sometimes the snow is a she, a sad one
The warmth of her heart
The cold of her skin.
Turning to see what isn't there.
He rages
Brewing a storm
He takes what's not his
Commands to do as he says.
She eddies to the ground,
He pleads for forgiveness.
They hold hands for the first time
A calm kiss shared between them.
Isaac - Snow in Snow
His cold dark heart beating rapidly.
Icicle like talons scraping his bonds.
His banished empire fading.
I mind so strong, but a body so weak.
Her gentle touch,
Soft finger reaching to the light,
Deposing of gloom
Evaporating darkness
His strong fists, now limp and hopeless
Millions of soldiers now coating the ground
Blood soaking there sharp ice swords.
Her palace a beautiful an icicle,
Shimmering in the once dark forests,
Now towers of light, a fantasy now reality.
Max - King vs Queen
He, the king of the wild winter
Not afraid of bitter wind
Untameable day and night
Twisting and meaning in a frenzy.
She, the queen of the aftermath of the wild winter storms.
Shapes the landscapes at her own will
Calm and comforting with wanted presence
Illuminating the world with dazzling displays.
Both fighting beneath bitter rain
Until neither can fight anymore
He, with his wild storms,
She, with fresh pictures in her mind.
Amelie
He, the snow howling, twisting in his rage
Moaning in agony blundering against his prison.
His sharp cruel fingers pleading for forgiveness and freedom.
Drifting down
She carefully lays herself down upon the icy ground,
Observing the land for bare hills and planes.
Her eyes full of warmth sparkle in the sun.
His dark eyes full of cold malice
Finally the bars shatter and he disappears into the storm outside in search of his sister.
She hears his cries and rushes to his side
Together at once more a family reunited.
Liam D - Omega
She peacefully wonders on bare hills
Creating an aura of coldness
She forms a mood of white
I'm lost in the fog.
In his rage
He conquers all in his path
A whirlwind of anger consumes him
Darkness covers the land.
She creates a palace of ice
Too frail for us
But too strong for her
Ice pulsates through her veins.
His muffled armies sneak through the night
Nothing survives the wrath
The battle will continue
For the rest of time.
Wow I think a lot of people's best Poems came from today the poem we were basing ours on was amazing I think this is my favourite poem that we have read so far this year. Also Amelie your poem was amazing đđŸđđ
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