Monday, 6 November 2017

Dreams

This morning the Year 6's were challenged to write from their heart, to give advice and to include a metaphor...

Abby
A dream created in your soul
An image of your past
The voice of hope.

A dream
Whistling on the breeze, the movement in the leaves
Letting your thoughts flow.

Be the voice of the future
Be the change of the past.

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A Voice
Stella
One voice can help
If you are that voice
You can make magic.

Magic that can save someone's hope
Someone's fantasy
A treasure from your own wonderland.

Your dreams
A reflection of your soul.

Life is an ocean
Rolling through your highs and lows.

For why do you have feet
If you have wings.
So fly.

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Jonah
A dream
A wolf
So when a wing is broken
A friend is given.

Keep hold of your dreams
For life is a friend
That is no friend at all.

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Ashley
To have the courage
To make mistakes
To be the first voice
To be the first voice that is out of tune.

One will become two
Two will become three
And yet it all comes back
To that first voice.

And if the song is broken
The broken bird is not safe.

To have courage
To be brave
And have that dream
That you will accomplish.

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Juliette
A lonely cloud
Wandering across the never ending sky
Aimlessly
Searching for a fellow who is willing to talk.

Let down once, never again you will be trusted
The bird in the flock banished.

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Jeremy
A dream
Is a world of hope
A piece of your soul
A world visualised
Kept in place by thoughts.

A dream
Emotions reflected by a mirror
A shell shining from the deep
A land of lost
To be held in your heart.

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Eli
A dream is a treasure
Glistening with hope
Conquering fear that lingers within.

Hold onto dreams
For if they pass
Life is a desolate wasteland
Your spirit will be lost
To icy tallons.

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Nico
Dreams are a river of hope
Flowing endlessly through time
Neve stopping.

Hold dreams as if they are your soul,
Your life essence,
Your meaning.

Strive to break your chains of valour
To be free.

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Sophie
Hold onto your dreams,
Keep them aloft.
Life is a blooming flower,
Forever blooming.

Dreams are hooves,
Galloping the fields.
Reflecting off your soul,
To be placed in your heart forever.

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Hannah
Dreams await
Holding but letting go
Towering on the horizon
Looming in my soul.

The wound in your heart
Waiting to be recovered
Standing tall
Not letting the dark stop you.

The song the caged bird will sing
Inspires the first voice to come
To the second voice, to the third
And if silenced
The light will continue to journey.

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3 comments:

  1. you all are poets

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  2. Very powerful poems. I can't wait to do poetry again

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  3. Those poems were fantastic i especially liked Stella's

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