Monday, 29 May 2017

Sunrise

We have had some powerful sunrises lately, check out our writing linked to this.

Ashley
Dawn enveloping the world with colour
Though the stars have lit the path
Once filled with darkness but gone once more
Hope fulfilling the world.

The bird's song urging me
To dance within the sun's light
It penetrates the moon's throne
With light.

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Sophie
The sun emerging at the water's edge
Illuminating the rippling sea
Silhouettes hovering.

Stars light the path, leading to an opening
Freedom warming unhopeful souls.

A bird sings nature's song
I have the urge to dance
Freedom envelopes me.

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Eli
The sun's fingers slowly peel away the ocean
As blinding beams start to conduct a choir.

The moon retreats
As the towering sun claims the throne
Illuminating its new kingdom.

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Chloe
The only thing my mind is set on
Is the musical ritual everybody loves
I stare out my window
For advice from nature.

I see vibrant colours
It makes my heart flutter
I watch as the sun invades the moon's throne
And the trees as they stretch after a long night of rest
My mind is blown because of what's occurring outside my window.

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Affection
Max
The wood, as usual
But then, the first strike blows
A feeling of drowsiness in some
A feeling of stirring in others.

Those some retreat to their sense of belonging
Those others leave their comfort zones.

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Jeremy
The sun's colour illuminates its surroundings
Bringing hope to all that deserve it
The light engulfs my room
My sheets strewn across the ground
Impersonating my body
The fierce sun glides
Across the sky.

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Vasilisa
Dawn envelopes the world with colour
As it also leaves it in peace
For the moon leaves the throne and the sun takes over.

A bird's voice starts to sing a song unknown
But to those who know it's a message
A message that will never be revealed.

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Liam G
Dawn envelopes the hopeless souls
Birds trying to jumpstart the world with their orchestra.

The sun's power regaining his reign.

The waves retaliate
One last stand available.

He reaches out
Pealing away at the waves
To reveal a blood sea.

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Hannah
Illuminating colours envelope me
Silhouettes emerging from the depths of the ocean
The towering sun claims the crown.

A bird's voice engulfs me
Beckoning me to dance
So I waltz to the sound of nature
The sun has risen again
Penetrating everything in its path.

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1 comment:

  1. What beautiful language Room 17. Urging...illuminating...emerging...engulfs! Delicious language!

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